Well done Emily! What a great blog! Here are some comments from 3 people in the class.
*****Well done Emily, you are a great writer. (Grace) *****Good sounding out Emily, with your word. (Keenan) *****Well done Emily, I love your full stops. (Sophie)
* Reminder: Remember that after a fulll stop, we need a capital letter.
My name is Treena and I am Denhym's Mum. Thank you for inviting me to visit your blog, which is absolutely sensational. Well done everyone!
I'm looking forward to reading more about Radcliffe and Tesco's adventures, and especially the exciting updates on Room 14 and all its members. Keep up the fantastic work.
Thanks again for letting me visit, and have a wonderful day.
Wow Emily, you are such a great "blogger"! I remember Tesco kissing that bird...I wonder if Tesco is old enough to be kissing??? Maybe Miss Brewer could tell us how old he is.. This is so cool, I can't wait to read more blogs from room 14's sausage rolls. Helena
Wow what an adventure! You must have taken good care of them.How did you take care of them? I would have lost them,I`m proud of you.You are a lucky girl.I hope you had a good time.
Hi Emily, we enjoyed reading about Radcliffe and Tesco. We visited Canada last week and saw a lovely silky black squirrel which was very cute. Wish you could have been with us.
Room 14 is an amazing Year 1 class with 5 and 6 year olds. We have started this Blog to show that writing can be shown to an audience and they can comment on our work.
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Well done Emily! What a great blog! Here are some comments from 3
people in the class.
*****Well done Emily, you are a great writer. (Grace)
*****Good sounding out Emily, with your word. (Keenan)
*****Well done Emily, I love your full stops. (Sophie)
* Reminder: Remember that after a fulll stop, we need a capital letter.
Hi Room 14,
Guess who this is?????
Mrs Ryder!!! I hope you guys haven't forgotten me yet!!
It is great to see more Radcliffe and Tesco adventures on room 14's blog! Well done Matthew, Emily Sophie and Camille.
I cant wait to read more!!!
By the way everyone, my beautiful card looks fantastic on my fridge at home!!!
Thank you again for my lovely presents.
Mrs Ryder
xxx
Hi Room 14,
My name is Treena and I am Denhym's Mum. Thank you for inviting me to visit your blog, which is absolutely sensational. Well done everyone!
I'm looking forward to reading more about Radcliffe and Tesco's adventures, and especially the exciting updates on Room 14 and all its members. Keep up the fantastic work.
Thanks again for letting me visit, and have a wonderful day.
Treena (Denhym's Mum)
Wow Emily, you are such a great "blogger"!
I remember Tesco kissing that bird...I wonder if Tesco is old enough to be kissing??? Maybe Miss Brewer could tell us how old he is..
This is so cool, I can't wait to read more blogs from room 14's sausage rolls.
Helena
WOW! What a amazing blog! I can't wait for more amazing stories. PS. An Emu chased me while Tesco was having true loves kiss with the bird.
Maddy
Wow what an adventure! You must have taken good care of them.How did you take care of them? I would have lost them,I`m proud of you.You are a lucky girl.I hope you had a good time.
Rebecca:room 15
Cool as was it hot
by Jake rm15
Cool as that must of been an adventur
Jake:room15
Hi Emily, we enjoyed reading about Radcliffe and Tesco. We visited Canada last week and saw a lovely silky black squirrel which was very cute. Wish you could have been with us.
Cool Emily, I like Australia too. from Ashleigh xxxx
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